Finally a Review......Controlled Burn

Controlled Burn

Bella has always joked about marrying Alice's much younger brother so she could be a part of her best friend's family, but now he's all grown up and hot. Bella tries to control the burn for him, but it quickly becomes a raging fire. ExB AH

Rated: T - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 30 - Words: 126,131

I know it has been quite awhile since I have posted a review but after finding this FanFic I had to post it here. First off it was right on time as I was looking for something light and funny to take my mind off of the crazy that my life was becoming. To say I was having a bad day would have been an understatement. I was looking through some other authors favorite stories when I saw this one and I am so glad that I gave it a chance.

To begin with it start different than I expected and Edward was quite younger than I expected. Also there was the fact that where normally Edward and Jacob are enemies because they are trying to get Bella's love in this story they are actually brothers. It doesn't make for a less hostile relationship but it does make for a even funnier one.

I will be honest that I started to stop reading after I found out these two different things but I am so glad that I didn't. Yes it was different than what I was expecting but Bella's inner monalogue is absolutely so funny that it makes the ages and everything else seem to make sense. The story does jump a little through the first few chapters but once you get into the story you stay put and you are actually grateful for the jumping.

I don't want to give to much away but trust me when I say you will be falling off your bed cracking up. It is a must read and a fast read as you will have a hard time walking away. I mean I almost skipped the White Collar to finish it and I never skip White Collar.

Run don't walk to this FanFiction and be sure to leave her some love. Read it HERE.

Ps. Don't forget to check out the outtakes in EPOV. The Fireman: Outtakes from Controlled Burn.